I loved how much energy you poured into this! And like V said, the imagery is incredible! I've been to the Oregon coast a few times too (as someone who lives in Oregon), and I can definitely feel the inspiration receding and crashing wave first into this poem. So beautiful!!
I have a trip planned in March this makes me more excited
It’s so beautiful up there. Just stay on the 101 and you’ll see some amazing stuff
Well done! I LOVE the Oregon Coast.
I love the way your vocabulary changed to suit the form. Great imagery.
That’s the toughest part I think. Fitting the form and still getting the message you want. You need to get creative
I loved how much energy you poured into this! And like V said, the imagery is incredible! I've been to the Oregon coast a few times too (as someone who lives in Oregon), and I can definitely feel the inspiration receding and crashing wave first into this poem. So beautiful!!
I’ve spent some time in Brookings, Oregon and there’s a beach there that I was picturing as I wrote that.
I was hoping to add a photo of Harris Beach State Park. Is that where the beach is? One of my absolute favorite places, along with Cannon Beach.
I was thinking of Whales Head beach. It’s a bit tucked away right off the 101
Ah! Ok. It is so amazing out that way.
the imagery is SO good!
Thank you. I was thinking of a specific beach in Oregon that I’ve gone to a few times